The principal is the most important person in the school. I disagree with this statement. I think students are the most important people in the school. The students make the school, there wouldn't be a school if there wasn't any students. I think students are the most important people because we are the ones needing to learn things for the future. The government makes schools for a reason (to have students educated not for the principals ) Therefore students make the school not the principal. That is why I think students are the most important people in the school.
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ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your Week 5 persuasive paragraph. You gave a great message that students are the most important people in the school. Great work following the OREO format. I challenge you to focus on your introduction (thesis) statement in a more creative way. How else can you introduce your topic rather than just stating it?
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