Paragraph

In Hurumanu 1 we watched a movie called Hunt For The Wilder People. Our class has been working on how to put a paragraph together properly.  The first task we did wasn't as specific as the one we have done now and the second task is more focused on explain than the last paragraph. We wrote 2 different paragraphs so we can get better and learn to see whats fits and what doesn't. 

My paragraph:

How has Ricky changed during the movie Hunt For The Wilderpeople and why was his change important? Ricky was a young, lonely standoff-ish boy who had no family at the start of the film but then he started to warm up to his new family three quarters through the movie.  The audience feels like an older parent or sibling watching Ricky grow up and change how he acts the film. This change was important because it shows that Ricky isn’t as bad as they make him out to be anymore and people watching may even feel like the way Ricky was and the audience can feel related to someone.The film effects used on the perspective of Ricky’s change throughout the movie were from other people point of view to see Ricky change if we were there in that moment.  My opinion of the film is that the movie ties quite well together and it is interesting. Ricky’s personality was filmed quite well and thought out precisely.

Throughout the sessions of learning how to write paragraphs correctly I learnt they ways to put sentences together in the right way and the sentences link. This has helped my writing because when I write a "story" I can write the right way and do it correctly. My Favourite part of the film study was mainly everything I don't really have a favourite I think the work was reasonably fun to do.